I have a writing assignment. Response Essay about the article that I attached.

I’ve already started my essay, but I need someone who can check it and correct whatever he’s think it is wrong such as, grammar, structure, transitions, connecting ideas .. etc.

you can add and delete ideas, but don’t rewrite the whole essay. And each paragraph should be half page, except the summary not longer than 90 words.

the focusing question is

( Should the world follow Kenya in banning plastics bags?)

1st Paragraph: No, the side effects vary among countries

2nd Paragraph: yes, but the citizens should act beside the government too.

3rd Paragraph: between, not banning the plastic bags, but imposing fees.

I’ve attached the essay, the article, the suggestionsfor improving the essay, and the guidelines.