the paper needs to be edited. The content is highlighted. if in Microsoft word you click view comments there will be the comments matching the highlighted text.

Most of the editing needs: -scholarly tone, – heading errors, -formatting errors (APA) -too long of paragraphs -stats (I do not have the orginal sources so this can be replaced with similar content of your finding)

not so much spelling issue just clearing up the highlighted content.

the only thing you may run into for adding is the stats area. there is a section highlighted- please replace if you cant find the original source*****

it is about 15 pages (not full) of revisions – need back in 48 hours